F-01 · Problem-aware · 'why is [task] so hard'
Problem Receipt
ICP target: Solution-unaware power user drowning in a manual workaround
Hook bank (10)
- 01I did this manually for 9 months. Here's the receipt.
- 02This spreadsheet cost me 40 hours a month.
- 03Nobody tells you what [task] actually costs you.
- 04POV: it's 11pm and you're still doing [task] by hand.
- 05I timed it. [Task] took 3h 12m. Watch.
- 06The dumbest part of my week, ranked.
- 07Show me your [task] setup, I'll show you the leak.
- 08I was wrong about [task] and it cost me [number].
- 09Three tabs, two apps, one nervous breakdown.
- 10If your [task] looks like this, stop scrolling.
Script skeleton
- 0:00–0:02Hook over the literal mess (screen or desk).
- 0:02–0:07Quantify the pain: time, money, or missed outcome.
- 0:07–0:16Show the old workflow at 2x speed, narrate the failure point.
- 0:16–0:26Same job in-app, one continuous take, no cuts.
- 0:26–0:32Result number on screen + CTA.
Visual structure
Handheld screen-record + face cam corner. Real artifacts, zero stock footage.
Proof points
Timer overlay · Before/after count · Named outcome metric
Objections handled
- 'Another app to learn'→ One screen. I set it up on camera in 22 seconds.
- 'My setup is different'→ Mine was too — here's the messy version, not the demo.
CTA options
- · Link in bio → deep link to the exact screen
- · Comment 'RECEIPT' for the template
Variants (10)
Failure modes
- · Hook shows the product before the pain
- · Pain is abstract, not numeric
- · Cuts break the one-take proof
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